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Carnelian Sky by ~korenna:iconkorenna:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Haiku & Eastern




Embattled lovers
      slip to long shadows under
             carnelian sky
©2006-2009 ~korenna
:iconkorenna:

Author's Comments

Conceived as I read the chapter about the Judiciary.

Stock pictures from =resurgere

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~bled Mar 21, 2006, 8:54:02 PM
I can see it ^^

I think this is the way to go for you..since your stuff is usually packed full and rich so I don't know what to look at. Going minimalistic really brings out the few words you use and the few images you create...they dun trample over each other in stupider people's minds ^^
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~korenna Mar 22, 2006, 11:49:10 AM
This is relatively new territory for me, so I'm particularly thankful for your comment. Compared to the thickly concentrated sap of my in-class essays, this "refined" drop seems like thoughtful respite amidst the thrashing chaos. :P

--
“You know, I’m Beowulf, you know, I’m Grendel. I don’t know who I am. But they’re after me.” - MC (Karl) Rove

imTH:_R{K},ost{T}U//pb
:iconangeldumottschunard:
~AngelDumottSchunard Jul 27, 2006, 9:11:12 PM
That invokes one beautiful image.
I can't say much about this, its very pretty to me :)

--
"You don't think much of women on ships do you?"
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~korenna Jul 27, 2006, 10:55:17 PM
You've already a lot :)

Thanks...

--
“You know, I’m Beowulf, you know, I’m Grendel. I don’t know who I am. But they’re after me.” - MC (Karl) Rove

imTH:_R{K},ost{T}U//pb
:iconangeldumottschunard:
~AngelDumottSchunard Jul 27, 2006, 10:58:07 PM
you're welcome??

--
"You don't think much of women on ships do you?"
:iconkorenna:
~korenna Jul 27, 2006, 11:01:13 PM
Whoops! You've already said a lot ^^;

--
“You know, I’m Beowulf, you know, I’m Grendel. I don’t know who I am. But they’re after me.” - MC (Karl) Rove

imTH:_R{K},ost{T}U//pb
:iconangeldumottschunard:
~AngelDumottSchunard Jul 27, 2006, 11:02:30 PM
oh ok

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"You don't think much of women on ships do you?"
:iconceebab:
~ceebab Aug 2, 2006, 12:02:43 PM
I like it. Short, sweet, simple, but evokes a strong image.

--
"A life lived in fear is a life half lived."
- Baz Luhrmann

"Were you born to resist or be abused?
I will never give in. I refuse."
- Foo Fighters
:iconkorenna:
~korenna Aug 2, 2006, 12:35:16 PM
I appreciate the encouraging comments :)

--
“You know, I’m Beowulf, you know, I’m Grendel. I don’t know who I am. But they’re after me.” - MC (Karl) Rove

imTH:_R{K},ost{T}U//pb
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~dramaticsinner Aug 9, 2006, 8:06:43 AM
Very peaceful. It produces strong images which is wonderful... Very lovely.

--
"Nothing makes us so lonely as our secrets."

-Paul Tournier
Wanna hear a secret?
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